(set: $name to "")
(set: $health to 100)
(set: $confidence to 5)
(set: $preparedness to 5)
(set: $inventory to (a:))
(set: $documents to (a:)) <!-- Holds: Passport, Bank Statement -->
(set: $evidence to (a:)) <!-- Bureaucratic failures -->
(set: $frustration to 0) :: Start
<div class="image-container">
<img src="C:\Users\user\Pictures\Twine Images\2150761466.jpg">
<div class="text-overlay">This is the text overlaying the image.</div>
</div>
Welcome to the City Benefits Verification System.
Please enter your full name:
(input-box: bind $name)
(link-goto: "Begin", "Prologue")
"Hello, $name. To retain your benefits, you must provide the following:"
* Official ID (Passport)
* Bank Account and recent Statement
Status:
* Documents: (print: $documents)
* Frustration: $frustration
* Evidence Collected: (print: $evidence's length)
Choose where to go:
* (link-goto: "Visit ID Office", "IDOffice")
* (link-goto: "Open Bank Account", "BankOffice")
* (link-goto: "Check Email Notices", "EmailCentre")
* (link-goto: "Go to Admin Appeals", "AdminAppeals")
* (link-goto: "Speak to Case Officer", "CaseOfficer")
* (link-goto: "View Evidence File", "EvidenceFile")
(if: $frustration >= 5)[
(link-goto: "Collapse from Burnout", "Burnout")
]You approach the ID Bureau window.
"We require two documents to issue a **passport**:
(1) A **bank statement**, and
(2) **Proof of address**."
(if: $documents contains "Bank Statement" and $documents contains "Proof of Address")[
"You qualify. Your passport will arrive in 3–5 business days."
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Passport"))
]
(else-if: $documents contains "Temporary ID")[
"You have a Temporary ID and bank details? Alright, we'll issue you a passport."
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Passport"))
(set: $inventory to it + (a:"Lost Hours Form"))
(set: $frustration to $frustration + 1)
]
(else:)[
"You’re still missing required documents."
(set: $frustration to $frustration + 1)
]
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")The clerk looks up.
"To open an account, we need an official ID."
(if: $documents contains "Passport" or $documents contains "Temporary ID")[
"You’re approved. Account created. Statement issued."
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Bank Statement"))
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Bank Account"))
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Proof of Address"))
]
(else:)[
"No ID? Then no account. Policy is policy."
(set: $frustration to $frustration + 1)
(set: $evidence to it + (a:"Bank rejected applicant for lacking ID"))
]
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")You check your inbox:
- One message tells you to upload ID to receive benefits.
- Another says you need benefits to access the ID portal.
- A third confirms your previous upload failed due to unsupported file format.
(set: $preparedness to $preparedness + 1)
(set: $evidence to it + (a:"Conflicting automated messages"))
"You feel your grip on reality begin to loosen."
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")A tired officer sees your stack of emails and failed attempts.
"You’re clearly trying. We can issue you a **Temporary ID**, valid for basic services."
(if: $evidence's length >= 2)[
(set: $documents to it + (a:"Temporary ID"))
"You receive a laminated card with 'TEMPORARY' stamped in red."
]
(else:)[
"We need documented failure before we can help. Sorry."
(set: $frustration to $frustration + 1)
]
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")You sit across from the Case Officer.
(if: $documents contains "Passport" and $documents contains "Bank Statement")[
(set: $frustration to 0)
"You did it. Somehow. Against all odds."
(link-goto: "Final Outcome", "EndingSurvivor")
]
(else:)[
"You still don't have everything. Come back when you're properly documented."
(set: $frustration to $frustration + 1)
]
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")Here's what you've gathered:
* (print: $evidence)
(if: $evidence's length >= 3)[
(link-goto: "Submit to Ombudsman", "ExposeSystem")
]
(else:)[
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")
]You compile your notes and send a formal complaint.
The Ombudsman replies:
"This is a widespread issue, but we lack authority to intervene directly. Keep fighting the good fight."
(set: $health to $health - 10)
(set: $confidence to $confidence + 1)
(set: $frustration to 0)
(link-goto: "Back to Reception", "Prologue")<img src="C:\Users\user\Pictures\Twine Images\2150761466.jpg">
You have all your documents. You retain your benefits.
You stare out the window, exhausted but victorious.
"$name has survived the system — this time."
**THE END**You slump in a chair at the Job Centre and stop trying.
(set: $health to 0)
"Your case is marked as 'Did Not Comply.' You are removed from the system."
**GAME OVER – Burned Out by Bureaucracy**
(link-goto: "Restart", "Start")